I need your help. I’ve taken it upon myself to write a mission statement for our church’s Benevolence Committee, which I also want to rename to Service Team or something less corporate. An elder saw an earlier draft and asked (quite reasonably) for some more scriptural support, which I’ve included.
Take a look at the draft below and make suggestions how to improve it without adding length. Don’t be shy. Are the scriptures right? Is the focus correct?
I could also use help with the name. Service Team is less corporate but it’s still vague.
[OCOC means "Oxford church of Christ"]
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We hope to be guided by the goals below, all of which grow out of our vision statement:
Providing a cup of cool water to those who truly need it, without expectation of return.
“For I was hungry and you gave me something to eat, I was thirsty and you gave me something to drink, I was a stranger and you invited me in, I needed clothes and you clothed me, I was sick and you looked after me, I was in prison and you came to visit me.” (Matthew 25: 35-36)
Broadly stated, our goals are these:
1) To bring people to Christ by serving the needs of the community, stepping out of our comfort zone to make a personal connection with the truly needy.
On hearing this, Jesus said, “It is not the healthy who need a doctor, but the sick.” (Matthew 9:12)
2) To grow the congregation spiritually by involving them in meaningful, long-term works of service.
But give what is inside the dish to the poor, and everything will be clean for you. (Luke 11:41)
3) To especially grow the youth and instill in them a sense of their calling in the area of benevolence.
For if the willingness is there, the gift is acceptable according to what one has, not according to what he does not have. (2 Cor. 8:12)
4) To build bridges among other OCOC committees and teams to support them in their efforts at evangelism, teaching, etc.
Just as you excel in everything—in faith, in speech, in knowledge, in complete earnestness and in your love for us—see that you also excel in this grace of giving. (2 Cor. 8:7)
5) To grow the reputation of Christ (and by extension the OCOC) in the Oxford community.
“What marks us in the eyes of our enemies is our loving kindness. ‘Only look,’ they say, ‘look how they love one another’” (Tertullian, Apology 39).
We hope to move beyond Band-aid benevolence that fails to address the root problems and into a meaningful and effective expression of Christ’s compassion.
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So what do you think? Leave me a comment on how to improve it without adding length.